Showing posts with label Storytelling. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Storytelling. Show all posts

Thursday, April 21, 2016

Week 13 Storytelling: Beauty and Brownie's Test

There once was a clan of deer. This clan was quite large with Father being the leader. Father and Mother had two fawns. Their names were Beauty and Brownie. Beauty and Brownie were in charge of their own herds within the clan.

One day, Father told Beauty and Brownie to take their herds out of the forest because it was not safe for them to stay there.

“But I do not want to leave!” Shouted Brownie.

“I am sorry, but you must,” stated Mother.

“Why must we leave Father?” Beauty asked.

“There is great danger at these times. Hunters are after us, and we cannot all stay here,” said Father.

“Come with us!” Brownie and Beauty urged.

“We are too old to make the travel,” Father said.

“You must take your herds and leave. Travel by night, watch for hunters, and always go around the villages,” Mother said concerned.

So, Brownie and Beauty gathered their herds and left when it turned dark.

Brownie and Beauty split up with their herds. Beauty thought that it would be too dangerous having all of the deer together, and that it would slow the whole group down if everyone traveled together. Brownie was nervous being away from his whole family. He was not as smart as Beauty was.

Beauty listened to what their parents told her and she traveled at night. She made sure to never go through any of the villages. She always led her herd around them. She made sure to never fall into any of the hunter’s traps, and she always made sure to point out to the herd where a trap was. She was a wonderful leader. Beauty was patient, kind, and caring towards her herd. She made sure to always take car of her herd whatever they may need.

Brownie on the other hand, he forgot what his parents told him. He took his herd out in the middle of the day when all the villagers were outside. He always went through all of the villages and did not go around the villages like Mother told him. The consequences of this were horrendous. His herd was quickly diminishing. Brownie did not really seem to mind. He was just concerned with making sure he was well fed and safe. He knew that as long as there was someone slower than him in his herd that he would be okay.

Eventually, it was safe enough to come home, so Beauty came home with her entire herd. Not one of the deer in her herd was ever harmed through the dangerous time. Mother and Father were so pleased!

A few of Brownie’s herd trickled in, but Brownie was not to be seen. Mother asked a few members of his herd about this, and they simply said, “We do not know. One day we just woke up and he was gone!”

Brownie was never to be seen again…








Author's Note: After writing all the stories in my portfolio, it was nice to be able to just do a little fun story like this one! This story was from More Jataka Tales by Babbitt called Beauty and Brownie. The Jataka Tales are quite fun to read, and mostly all have a great lesson that comes with it. I followed the original story almost exactly except that the father was the one that told them to travel at night and gave them all the advice not the mother. I also added some dialogue and added some more knowledge about the characters. I had a lot of questions reading the original story, so I wanted to make this story less vague. For instance, I added more dialogue to give more personality to the characters. I also added that Beauty is very smart and kind, and Brownie is dumb and selfish.  






Friday, April 15, 2016

Week 12 Storytelling: Little Hector and the Monkeys 2

We last left off when the Great Advisor, Hector the little pig, told the colony of monkeys to never let any apples fall from the apple tree. One day, when the monkeys were out playing a game, a single apple fell from the tree and floated down the river to a village where a woman picked it up.


“I should not eat this, but this apple looks so delicious,” the woman whispered to herself. After a while of contemplating, she lifted the apple to her mouth and took a small bite. The apple poured tastes of delight into her mouth. “This is the best apple I have ever tasted in all the land!” she yelled.

She hurried home to tell her family of the wonderful tasting blessing she received on her way home, but as she went to take a step forward, she became very disoriented and fell to the ground. She suddenly gasped for breath, trying to get enough to remain conscious. An old fisherman saw her fall to the ground and rushed over to her. The woman before she sucked her last breath said, “The apple… it is… dangerous.”

The man shook her trying to get her to breathe again, but she did not. The fisherman was so disturbed by this sight he immediately went to the king to tell of the incident he just witnessed.

The king was outraged by this and demanded that all the best detectives find out where this poisonous apple came from. They patrolled the city and came to the conclusion that it came from the jungle by the river. The king ordered a team to go search in the jungle for this dangerous fruit. The team reached the giant apple tree and saw that it was filled with hundreds of huts. They walked a little closer and realized that monkeys were everywhere in the tree! “It is a militant colony of monkeys!” they exclaimed.

The group quickly rushed back to the king to describe the wonder of what they saw. The king was mortified! He told the group that the monkeys and the tree must be destroyed because a life was ended due to this tree and the monkeys were going to bear the consequence.

 So the group gathered all of their best weapons to battle the monkeys and returned into the jungle, but before the group could make it into the tree Hector the little pig stood in the middle of a small opening. The group was confused why a small pig was just standing there. Small pigs were considered a delicacy in the kingdom and the group decided to try and capture the pig to bring back for the king. The group knew that the king would be happy when the monkeys and tree were dead but to also bring back a small pig would just be icing on the cake!

So the group sneaked closer and closer to try and catch the pig. All of a sudden Hector just broke and ran into the dense jungle.

“He is so fast for a pig!”

“We must get him!”

“For the king!” they shouted into the night.

The group chased and stumbled through the trees for hours trying to catch Hector but they could never catch him until one of the group members said, “Does anyone know where we are?”

“Oh no…”


Hector had finally lost the group. He had sent them deep into the jungle where the ferocious lion lived. He and Hector were good buddies growing up, so Hector knew that he would take care of the jungle intruders.

Hector trotted back to the tree to meet his monkey followers.

“Are they gone?” one of the monkeys asked.

“All is well… for now at least,” replied Hector.







Author’s Note: This two-part story was by far my favorite to make! I fell in love with the Jataka Tales, so it was pretty easy to include that in my Portfolio. I find the past lives of Buddha to be inspiring and fascinating. This story was a mix of two Jataka Tales. The first one is the Monkey Bridge by Inayat in Twenty Jataka Tales. In this story there was a giant monkey king that told the group to never let the fruit fall from a great fruit tree into the river. Eventually, a fruit fell into the river and a fisherman found it. A search team went and found the fruit tree and planned to kill the monkeys to get the delicious fruit. The monkey king saved his group of monkeys by letting them climb on his back to another tree via his back and a long reed. One of the monkeys broke his back while climbing to safety. I mainly used this story in the first story of the two-part series, but I made Hector, who was supposed to represent the heroic monkey that saved his followers, lure the group out the jungle. This part came from the second Jataka Tale, which was The Woodpecker, Turtle, and Deer by Babbitt. This dynamic trio saved each other’s lives by distracting a hunter from trying to harm them. The deer lured the hunter into the forest long enough that the deer could circle back around and set the turtle free. 


Tuesday, April 5, 2016

Week 11 Storytelling: Little Hector and the Monkeys

Hector was a little pig who had an interesting life of great adventure and crazy shenanigans. His life was probably more exciting than most, I would say. Hector had lived with many people throughout his life. Instead of finding another person to look after him after his last owner, Arjuna, died, Hector decided to mix it up and go off into the jungle alone. Hector survived a long exile with Arjuna before, so Hector knew how to survive in the jungle.

When Hector was strolling in the jungle one day, he found a habitat of monkeys. At first Hector was terrified the monkeys were going to try and harm him, but the monkeys did the opposite. In fact, the monkeys took Hector to be their leader as the Great Advisor. The monkey colony took care of Hector by always making sure he was well fed and safe. The monkeys' home was a giant apple tree. This was no normal apple tree. The apples were the biggest apples in all the world and the tastiest apples you ever ate. This tree was so large that the trunk was a mile in diameter. The monkeys made little huts for their families in the large branches. This was perfect for the group of monkeys to store food and live close together for protection. Obviously little Hector could not climb the tree like the monkeys could, so the monkeys would lift Hector up to where all the monkey huts were scattered. The monkeys also made Hector his own little hut and had miniature bridges built perfect for Hector’s size, so he could get to places within the tree.

Since Hector had seen many things in his many miniature pig years, he was very wise, and all the monkeys sought Hector for words of wisdom. One day, he said to the monkeys, “Do not let a single fruit fall into the river, for down the river lies danger.”

The monkeys were not sure what Hector meant by his words, but they loved Hector and knew he was wiser than any creature they met. Listening to Hector, the monkeys made sure that no fruit fell into the river.

 There was a great game amongst the monkeys called the Banana Battle. The monkeys would go into the jungle and see who could find the most bananas. The monkey with the most bananas would be the winner. The prize for the most bananas was to get to have dinner with Hector. This was a grand prize because Hector was always so busy with sharing his wisdom. He would eat alone to give himself some quiet time.

On the day of the Banana Battle, everyone was scavenging for some bananas away from the tree in the jungle. No one seemed to notice that a single apple fell into the river…

Down the river was a woman. She was walking home when she noticed a beautiful apple washed up on the shore. She looked around to see if anyone was around. She quickly walked over to it and picked it up. This was no ordinary apple. This was the most gorgeous-looking apple she had ever seen. She was very hungry from such a long walk. She did not know if she should eat it or not for she did not know where it came from. But this apple looked so tempting and so delicious. She could not resist… (Jumanji music playing in the background)





Author’s Note: I really enjoyed writing this story. My inspiration was the Monkey-Bridge in Twenty Jataka Tales by Inayat. The Twenty Jataka Tales is a collection of past lives of Buddha. I veered off of Monkey-Bridge significantly. In the original story, there was a giant monkey king that told the group to never let the fruit fall from a great fruit tree into the river. Eventually, a fruit fell into the river and a fisherman found it. A search team went and found the fruit tree and planned to kill the monkeys to get the delicious fruit. The monkey king saved his group of monkeys by letting them climb on his back to another tree via his back and a long reed. One of the monkeys broke his back while climbing to safety. I only told the first half of the story in hopes of coming out with a second half of the story next. I changed the original story to include my friend Hector the miniature pig. I also claimed the fruit to be an apple. In the original story all that was said was a fruit tree, but I wanted to make it less vague in hopes that it would be easier for the reader to picture the story unfolding in their head.


The Monkey-Bridge, Twenty Jataka Tales by Inayat, 1939

Thursday, March 24, 2016

Week 9 Storytelling: The Ultimate Gamble

Hector, a miniature pig with the cutest little snout and the rosiest little cheeks, lay on his padded pillow as he watched his owner, Arjuna, and a strange man he did not know play a game. There were a lot of onlookers giving him inquisitive faces. They kept looking at the two men playing the game and then back at Hector. Hector was not really sure what to think about all of this. Arjuna brought him to some king’s palace. Arjuna did not tell him what was going on or why he even took Hector with him. Arjuna normally makes Hector stay at home whenever he goes to visit people, let alone a big fancy king.

All of a sudden, the king that was playing against Arjuna stood up from the game with a big grin on his face. Arjuna looked devastated. He sat on his knees and covered his face with his hands. The king came up to Hector and said, “Hello, Hector. I am your new master now. My name is King Virata. You will be a nice asset to my collection.” As King Virata was exclaiming this, he pointed to a hallway beyond the room they were in that had mounts of various animals on the walls. Hector realized that he was in very serious danger. He squealed and tried to run, but just as Hector got on all four legs one of King Virata’s servants snatched him.

Hector sat helpless in the servant’s hands. He looked up to lock eyes with Arjuna. He looked so crushed. The defeated Arjuna got up from his knees and said, “I cannot take this! We must play again. I cannot watch as I see my prize pig die a terrible death because of my own selfish ways. Let me have a rematch to regain my honor and my pig.”

But King Virata had a better idea. He told Arjuna that if he would go into exile for twelve years that he could take his pig and leave. Arjuna realized the mercy that was given to him and quickly got Hector from the scary servant and ran out the door. He had tears in his eyes as he rushed past all the guards at the gate. Arjuna did not stop running until he made it to the forest with Hector still in tow.


Hector was very worried about Arjuna. Hector had never seen Arjuna be this much in distress before. When Arjuna finally stopped frantically running, he collapsed by a tree and looked at Hector. Arjuna said, “Hector, I am so sorry for trying to gamble you away like that. I did not realize what I had done until it was almost too late. I looked into your eyes and thought I had lost you forever. Once King Virata told me that I could have you back if I would go into exile, I could not help but take you and just run as far away as I possibly could. I am so sorry, Hector. I will never ever do that to you again.”





Author’s Note: I wrote this story with my little friend Hector the pig in mind. I hope to include Hector in all of my stories. I realize that a miniature pig is incredibly random and could be annoying for some, but I wanted to do something different and unique! And plus, who does not like miniature pigs! They are adorable! My inspiration for my story was the Mahabharata but I strayed off the storyline more so than my usual stories. I really wanted Hector to be the main character in this story, so I decided to switch him with Draupadi’s character. I also switched Arjuna with Yudhishthira and Virata with Duryodhana. Yudhishthira gambled everything in his life including his wife Draupadi.  Yudhishthira makes a deal with King Virata to go into exile. When they were in exile, they hid in disguise in the court of King Virata. I wanted to go along the lines of the Mahabharata but really make it my own in a way that someone who has not read the Mahabharata would not have to know any information about the plot to enjoy my story of Hector the miniature pig. In the Mahabharata, even though Draupadi was extremely loyal, she did really get angry with her husband for gambling her away, but in the movie by Peter Brook I feel like that was not expressed successfully. So, I decided to have Hector never get upset at Arjuna.   

    

In King Virata's court where Kichaka is humiliating Draupadi  

The Mahabharata by Peter Brook
Laura Gibbs, Indian Epics Reading Guides, May 2015